Admissions
Aarav M. · EA · UMich
Grade 12 · IL · Admit
“Essay feedback never rewrote my voice — they just made it sharper. Early action win.”
The challenge
Aarav had a strong profile but a scattered essay draft that read like a résumé in prose.
What we did
Three structured revision rounds focused on a single narrative thread, plus a school-by-school fit list built around his robotics work.
The outcome
He was admitted early action to the University of Michigan.